Screenshots

Good

All of the important information is present, the question is where should I be looking?

Better

OK this is much better, I see a more specific focus. It looks like a Jenkins server and some code being executed. Still what exactly are you trying to draw my attention towards?

Best

Now this screenshot is perfect! It’s removed everything that doesn’t matter and even draw boxes with labels around the specific details being called out.

Note: Some would argue the darkened screen around the bright Jenkins server is unecessary and I wouldn’t hold that against you if you agree with them. I personally prefer wider landscape screenshots because they render nicley in word documents as apposed to taller or square ones.